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Hai guise \o Sorry sebab delay part 1 cerita ni. Stress ma minggu ni tapi Alhamdulillah dah okay ☺ So ini dia saya siap rewrite lagi sebab tak puas hati. Sorry kalau bosan ;_; Again English is not my second language, sorry for any grammatical/spelling errors. Hearts x

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**Elaine's POV**

My head was aching and my body was burning. I opened my right eye - the one that wasn't close by my eyepatch and PERFECT - half expecting to be lying in a hospital. But instead I was standing in front of an old burnt house. MY old burnt house in England. I wanted to turn around but something was pulling me in.

Then I heard it. Their voices. 

"Elaine... Help your dear appa..." says a male voice.
"Elaine I'm trapped upstairs." says a female voice.
"Elaine. I love you. Save yourself." The last voice was Andrew, the boy I love. I ran inside to find everything in place. I searched for them upstairs and went to my parents' room. When I touched the door knob, it was scorching hot. So I tried cooling it down with a bucket of water, but to no avail. Their voices were getting louder. I kicked the door down and a blast of flames came to my left eyes. I blacked out again.

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Gongchan wipes Elaine's face that was dripping with sweat. He examined her features when Sandeul squeezed in. 

"Channie, don't you want to open her eyepatch?" he asks in a hushed voice. Gongchan shakes his head and says, "No. Her sister forbids it." Sandeul made a face and walked away with a duck mask in his hand. He joins Baro who was drinking watermelon juice. Meanwhile, Jinyoung was with Jane.

He studied how Jane was behaving, quite emotionless, really.

"May I know your name?" asks Jinyoung. 
"It's Jane."
"Where are you two from?"
"England.
"Okay... why did your sister faint? Does she have some kind of disease?"

Jane didn't reply and looked at her sister. Then at Gongchan. Yes, she thought. His face and Andrew is exactly the same. She looks back at Jinyoung, shaked her head and mouthed a "no". 

Suddenly, "Jane... ugh my head hurts." Elaine woke up but still had her eyes closed. Jane rushes to her sister. When Elaine opened her eyes, she felt puzzled to see 5 boys. She gasped when she saw Gongchan.

"Hey hey.. Please don't faint again," says Sandeul.
"Why am I here?" asks Elaine.
"Don't you remember? You fainted in front of our maknae," says deep-voiced Baro while patting Gongchan's shoulder. Gongchan was starong intensely at Elaine. Elaine noticed his eyes were sparkling just like a puppy. But Elaine looked away because she knew, that couldn't be Andrew.

"Uh thanks but you guys should have sent me to a hospital or something."
"Naaaah, Gongchan insisted taking you here!"'said Jinyoung. Gongchan blushed and hit Jinyoung in the ribs. "Hyung! Don't embarrass me... Come I'll take you two home." Gongchan took Elaine and Jane's bags and sped out.

"Well that was flattering," says Jane.

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"You guys..are going to live here?!" 

Gongchan stared at the house in front of him. The door's broken in two, the windows are shattered and the roof looks like it was about to fall off. When he entered the house, the floors were half eaten by termites and the electricity was long gone. There was water, only rusted.

Elaine looked down in embarrassment. "This is where we used to live. We grew up here until Appa finally had the money and job to move to England. We can manage." A tear escaped her eyes but she quickly wiped it away. 

Jane's face, which was emotionless the whole day, finally frowned to the sight of her house. "I'll need to adjust..." she says. 

Gongchan went out and closed the door behind him while Elaine was fighting to get on the porch. "Thank you, er, guy." He felt guilty, though. I can't let two girl live here in this condition.

"Hey wait!" Gongchan turned. Elaine looked at him. 

"Um, you didn't pay me back!"
"What?"
"Yeah! I dragged you all the way from the airport to my home, and drove you all the way from my home to here."
"Oh.. Okay... How shall I pay you back?" 
Gongchan grinned. "By staying with me and my friends in Seoul."
"What...." Elaine paused. Jane was considering Gongchan's suggestion because she doesn't really fancy living in a dump.
"Just until your house is fixed up."
"And how does that work out?"
"I'll call a decorator to redecorate your house!"

Elaine thought long and hard. Jane was nodding, meaning she liked the idea. Elaine only thought what was best for her sister, who was traumatised by the fire incident that left and ugly scar on her right arm....

"Okay. But, just until our house is fixed." Elaine finally decided.
"Alright! Let's go." 

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To be continued.

Labels: B1A4, Burnt, Fanfiction, Gongchan

Hai guise \o/ Saya berdiri..eh duduk....di sini untuk membuat lagu satu fanfic hehe. B1A4 lagi and Gongchan juga sebagai watak utama lol hahahaha. Anyway ini dia Prologue and Character list sorry kalau pendek ._. poster kalau saya rajin saya buat esok or lusa hoho.

P/S : English is not my first language /since I'm malay/ so sorry for any grammar mistakes. Comment lah tau hoho

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Prologue.

The eye patched girl shakes her beloved sister to wake her up. "We're here," she says. Her little sister blinked and looked out the aeroplane's window. "Seoul. We're finally here." The eye patched girl, Elaine, stands up and stretches after sitting in the aeroplane for 13 hours. She opens the compartment above her and pulls out 2 pink and blue bags. Her sister, Jane, applies one more line of eyeliner on her eyelids.

"Annyeonghaseyo, welcome to Korea. Passengers may exit the aeroplane," boomed the speaker. "Please exit in a straight line. Thank you for boarding with us. " 

"Come on Jane. I don't want to miss a taxi." says Elaine to her sister. 
"Relax, there're tons of taxis." But Elaine pushed her sister out anyway. After picking up their bags, they searched for the place where people go to board a taxi. As they were walking, Elaine noticed a familiar face surrounded by a group of screaming girls.

"Eh? Is that... No it could'nt be...." mumbled Elaine as she stopped in her tracks. 

Jane who just realized her sister stopped walking turned around to check on her big sister. "What's wrong, sis?" and looked towards the boy Elaine was looking at. Next thing she knew, Elaine was rushing towards the boy. Avoiding screaming girls and flashing camera until she was right in front of him.

"Andrew?!" screamed Elaine. The boy looked puzzled. Suddenly the flashes from the cameras turned into flames and Elaine remembered the dreadful night where her fiance and parents were killed in a fire. The memories hurt her head and she touched her left eye which has an eyepatch to conceal her pink skinless skin. She passed out.

Characters. 

Elaine Pierce - 19. An orphan. Wears an eyepatch to conceal the burn marks on her left eye. Isn't actually blind. Moved to Seoul with her sister to forget the bad memories from her hometown in England. Meets Gongchan at Incheon International Airport - she fainted after noticing that Gongchan's face resembles her late fiance who tried to save her parents in a fire two years ago. Rightful heir of the Pierce Gold. Has blue-green eyes.

Jane Pierce - 17. Elaine's little sister. Has been an antisocial girl after her parents died. Loves her big sister. Is good at painting and playing the piano. Has a pretty face but an ugly scar on her right arm due to the fire. Likes Jinyoung but keeps it a secret. Expresses her feelings through her paintings.

Gong Chan Sik - 20. Invites the Pierce sisters to stay with B1A4 after Jane showed the abandoned old house they were supposed to live in. Maknae and vocalist of B1A4. Falls in love with Elaine. Elaine's shoulder to cry on. Doesn't care about Elaine's complexion.

Jung Jin Young - 22. Leader of B1A4. Likes to observe Jane. Tries to win Jane's heart and trust. Helps the sisters by giving them jobs at WM Entertainment.

James Gerard - 17. Jane's long lost twin brother. He was mixed up with a dead baby after being born and his parents' thought he was dead. Raised by the Gerards - a problematic family. 

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Setakat ni, ni jelah yang mampu ._. Sorry kalau ada silap eja malas nak check. Should I continue? Comment lah kalau baik ehehe :3 Bye, Assalamualaikum! :-)

Labels: B1A4, Burnt, Fanfiction, Gongchan